rainbow after the rain
A rainbow After the storming rain
beautiful colors lighten up the day
A smile on your face
After the tears, and the pain
A miracle of life, a new born baby
After suffering
Any troubles that come your way
stay strong It'll pass
it wont last
life isn't a movie
but we can have our happy ending
it's all up to you
and the decisions you choose
Information of the poem
- Author: Poeticmind17 (
Offline) - Published: 22nd of January 2012 00:39
- Comment from author about the poem: let me know what you thinkk plz i dont think im that good at writing, so i wanna see what you think(:
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- Rating: 5.5/10 (2 votes)
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22nd of January 2012 05:29
Very nice
Rated this poem with a 6
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22nd of January 2012 22:55
thank you
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22nd of January 2012 22:12
Seemingly simplistic, yet thought-provoking on further contemplation, a serious piece with good imagery. Interesting, the cliches almost make it seem trite.
Rated this poem with a 5
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22nd of January 2012 22:54
I like your comments you really pay attention to everyones poems and their meaning, and thanks.{: