Lasting wave that swings and turns
Caressing the crystals that touch your path
Alas shattering the light when storm rages
Crushing the deep core once entrusted
Forces that mingle and change
Forcing the paint to make way
It roars and swallows
The cries that were heard
The silence, at the beginning belongs
No more than chaos that rules the rough
Moving gently and parting we move
The progress has started and hope lingers too
Passing time that makes us wonder
How long should we wait
The main worry is the lack of belonging
That solace will never overcome
Inside the mystery the darkness moves
The light inside that lingers too
Knowledge and patience is part of the answer
To open the key is to unlock from within
There; all along was waiting
The love we assumed was lost
The more we are open, the more we see
Expanding to see our light
Willing to set it free and alive
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I really love this one! It's very intriguing. I also feel like I've used "intriguing" to describe one of your other more recent poems as well, but it really fits for both. 🙂
Thank you!!! You know .. I would like to ask , other than find my poem intriguing do you find it inspiring? I see it like that, but just wondering 🙂
Take care
Best
D.
Yeah, I think inspiring is another good adjective for it. 🙂
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Your poem is beautiful and has much truth in his lyrics
Thank you very much, I am just hoping to be able to live it.
Best
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