Soldier
soldier is coming
war is not over
a battle just begin, a rage in rapture
don't know how to hide
i'm going
soldier is leaving
still war is not over
a new combat just begin, insanity captured
don't know how to run
i'm staying
cry till your last tears
soldier is saying
last tears then i have
yet feeling stays unchanged
impair..
soldier is disappearing
while i lost my wings
i'm dying
war is not over
a battle just begin, a rage in rapture
don't know how to hide
i'm going
soldier is leaving
still war is not over
a new combat just begin, insanity captured
don't know how to run
i'm staying
cry till your last tears
soldier is saying
last tears then i have
yet feeling stays unchanged
impair..
soldier is disappearing
while i lost my wings
i'm dying
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- Authors: sondra (Pseudonym)
- Visible: All lines
- Finished: 9th of April 2011 11:00
- Limit: 15 stanzas
- Invited: Public (any user can participate)
- Comment from author about the poem: This reminds me about my brother, that went to war.
- Category: Unclassified
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- Rating: 8/10 (1 votes)
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23rd of May 2011 19:44
well said ;)
Rated this poem with a 8
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10th of June 2011 20:49
thanks :]
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21st of July 2011 19:44
this reminds me of my brother too. he's in the army as well... good job!
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15th of December 2011 01:28
thanks! :)
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