a sweet promise
of of a million years
was broken by your tears
and the screaming sound
of apology to my ears
you left me hanging
begging to you on my knees
i pleaded with you
i even cried and said please
but my love for u
it was always true
something i couldnt undo
it was a damn bolt
i could not unscrew
this was one dream
i thought id never pursue
but i ended up doing it too
now i was lost and all alone
it was like de javu
no more lies
no broken promises from you
i guess you have nothing more to spew
but this is my promise
i will always love you
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Author:
ishmeal mikeal (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: what happened to me once upon a december
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
Wow, it is so almost powerful, maybe because I can identify with it.....I can feel it. You did an excellent job. And it is VERY sad. But Mikeal, why was it broken by THEIR tears? It sounds as if YOU are the one who was lied to and deceived and so woefully mistreated....she/he cried when lying and leaving?
she made a promise to me she will never leave me for no reason would she part from me but when the time came she broke up with me cried and said sorry cux she said she had no choice but i kept saying not to leave but now shes gone i never broke mine but she broke hers its kinda complicated
WOW.. it has power in a way.]
this is a great poem i practically have tears in my eyes. i like it..
very powerful n well written. i like it very much!!
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