it was dark
I was alone
I sat there and waited
for you to come
I looked at my watch
a thousand times
I looked through the trees
again and again
where are you sweet love
where have you gone
was this all a game
a dream
a lie
I stare out
looking but not seeing
still no sounds
no footsteps
no words
I checked the note
and see everything I had missed
the laughter behind it
the joke that I fell for
I walked to the trees and didn't stop
I walked past the river
I didn't stop
I walked to the bridge
and walked some more
walk walk walk
at school everyone looks around
but they don't see me
they laugh and they joke
but they don't know
something was found in the woods
everyone's listening
a body!! heartbroken!!
everyone stops and stares
its light now
but I won't see it
I see the darkness
I see the dreams
I see...
...death!!!
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Author:
Meadow (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 20th, 2010 03:38
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Comments2
Wow!! pretty powerful stuff for one so young. Your poem is really very good , keep it up! BF
I like rating great poems with a 10. In my opinion the realest ones like sorrow or struggle and pain show the deepest of emotion and you can show it all. Keep it up. 🙂
thanks i love writing poems on things i feel and things i see other people feel it so magical.
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